Comments on: ADVENTURES IN AN ART GALLERY • by Jessica Patient http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-jessica-patient/ Sun, 14 Mar 2010 22:42:25 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Vanessa Gebbie http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-jessica-patient/comment-page-1/#comment-259 Vanessa Gebbie Tue, 18 Nov 2008 17:00:33 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-a-poem/#comment-259 I appreciated the shapes, enjoyed the originality and the work that had gone into it. It made me THINK... thanks. I appreciated the shapes, enjoyed the originality and the work that had gone into it. It made me THINK… thanks.

]]> By: Nicholas http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-jessica-patient/comment-page-1/#comment-231 Nicholas Sun, 16 Nov 2008 06:25:03 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-a-poem/#comment-231 Thanks for pointing that out, Oonah! I was going to do it, but you beat me to it. Thanks for pointing that out, Oonah! I was going to do it, but you beat me to it.

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]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-jessica-patient/comment-page-1/#comment-215 Oonah V Joslin Fri, 14 Nov 2008 11:32:45 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-a-poem/#comment-215 You see...I said it wouldn't work! All right... Shard of light from ...................down .......................the passage, ..................................dragged by the ...............................................escalator. Now subtract the dots - see? You see…I said it wouldn’t work! All right…
Shard of light from
……………….down
…………………..the passage,
…………………………….dragged by the

………………………………………..escalator.
Now subtract the dots – see?

]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-jessica-patient/comment-page-1/#comment-214 Oonah V Joslin Fri, 14 Nov 2008 11:31:04 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/adventures-in-an-art-gallery-by-a-poem/#comment-214 I would like to point out that this had a rather less regular shape to it. For instance: Bet this doesn't work... Shard of light from down the passage, dragged by the escalator. Is supposed to look like a stair. But Jessica was good enough to allow us to put it up ccentred and we appreciatew that Jessica. Jessica's poem reminded me so much of exhibitions I'd been to all over the place and The Tate Modern in particular. Thank you Jessica - a wonderful poem! I would like to point out that this had a rather less regular shape to it. For instance: Bet this doesn’t work…
Shard of light from
down
the passage,
dragged by the

escalator.
Is supposed to look like a stair.

But Jessica was good enough to allow us to put it up ccentred and we appreciatew that Jessica.

Jessica’s poem reminded me so much of exhibitions I’d been to all over the place and The Tate Modern in particular. Thank you Jessica – a wonderful poem!

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