Comments on: AUTUMN BELLE • by R Jay Slais http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/ Sun, 14 Mar 2010 16:01:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Nicholas http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/comment-page-1/#comment-1294 Nicholas Sat, 28 Feb 2009 03:40:08 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/#comment-1294 Robin-- I think the idea suggested here is that the wasp is a princess until she emerges from her winter slumber and claims her crown. Robin–

I think the idea suggested here is that the wasp is a princess until she emerges from her winter slumber and claims her crown.

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/comment-page-1/#comment-1224 dj barber Mon, 23 Feb 2009 21:51:30 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/#comment-1224 Liked the interlacing of falling leaves and the wasp--all that purple as symbol of her regalness. --dj Liked the interlacing of falling leaves and the wasp–all that purple as symbol of her regalness.

–dj

]]> By: Roberta SchulbergGoro http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/comment-page-1/#comment-1223 Roberta SchulbergGoro Mon, 23 Feb 2009 15:58:58 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/#comment-1223 I don't know anything about wasps, so I'll assume it's accurate. A riveting poem that's a carving in the round in motion - an observation of instinct and seasons, from purple leaves to shadow to a purple season of hope rounding out the end as a new beginning, forming a discrete and graspable crafted sculpture. I don’t know anything about wasps, so I’ll assume it’s accurate. A riveting poem that’s a carving in the round in motion – an observation of instinct and seasons, from purple leaves to shadow to a purple season of hope rounding out the end as a new beginning, forming a discrete and graspable crafted sculpture.

]]> By: Gray http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/comment-page-1/#comment-1222 Gray Mon, 23 Feb 2009 15:41:32 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/#comment-1222 What a beautiful poem. Nice imagery, especially the way it captures the passing of just a moment of time. What a beautiful poem. Nice imagery, especially the way it captures the passing of just a moment of time.

]]> By: Robin Herrnfeld http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/comment-page-1/#comment-1221 Robin Herrnfeld Mon, 23 Feb 2009 14:41:27 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/#comment-1221 Lovely imagery. But is it a queen or a princess? Can't be both? Lovely imagery. But is it a queen or a princess? Can’t be both?

]]> By: Greg Schwartz http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/comment-page-1/#comment-1220 Greg Schwartz Mon, 23 Feb 2009 12:14:57 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/autumn-belle-by-r-jay-slais/#comment-1220 nice... i like the imagery, especially the first four lines. nice… i like the imagery, especially the first four lines.

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