CLEAN • by Vinita Agrawal

 

This year my burst of spring cleaning

left life’s cupboards bare

 

shells, letters, squat silences

dry flowers, leaves

your promises and yes, the hunger

were all forced to flee

 

dark moments that clung to dresses

purses, crumpled bills,

paper napkins, gifts and fantasies

were uprooted and mercilessly sunned

 

sounds were dealt with brutally

the cuckoo’s call with which

we sweetened our teas

was scrubbed from tea cups

 

the chatter of books

from where you quoted and misquoted

was chased from the shelves

into a silence of neat descending order

 

All images, imprints and touches

met the soft duster cloth

it wiped away the softness

sponged away the acid

hardened the heart

and made way for saccharine

 

the mirror was hardest to clean

for it had reflections

that wouldn’t settle…

they flitted away

before they could be erased

 

 

 



Vinita Agrawal was born in the desert city of Bikaner in North-West India in 1965. She is a writer, researcher and poet and has been published in print magazines, journals and online. She has been a part of a few international spoken-word events. She is inspired by the Buddha and by the great Himalayan Mountains. She feels her spirit is set free when in the monsoons. She lives with her husband in New Delhi and has a college-going son. She can be reached at vinitaagrawal18@yahoo.co.in


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CLEAN • by Vinita Agrawal, 3.6 out of 5 based on 16 ratings
Posted on February 17, 2012 in Other, Poems
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6 Responses to “CLEAN • by Vinita Agrawal”


  1. Carol Ayer Says:
    February 18th, 2012 at 8:15 am

    Lovely. 5 stars from me.

  2. Andrea Pawley Says:
    February 18th, 2012 at 7:48 pm

    So immediate and vibrant. Great poem!

  3. Balaka Ghosal Says:
    February 20th, 2012 at 8:40 pm

    Very deep, touching! Thank you Vinita! I loved the subtle analogies. The pathos is acute, it needs the wings of hope to lift it from the gloom and fly it to the world of endless joy.

  4. vinita agrawal Says:
    February 21st, 2012 at 10:49 pm

    Thank you, Carol for the five stars!! Andrea for the appreciation and Balaka for the generous comments and insight!

  5. marion Says:
    February 22nd, 2012 at 1:19 pm

    Really lovely.

  6. vinita agrawal Says:
    February 28th, 2012 at 11:32 pm

    Thank you Marion!

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