Comments on: DEJA VU • by Doug Paul Case

By: BP: Deja Vu (Published!?!) « Doug Paul Case

BP: Deja Vu (Published!?!) « Doug Paul Case — Thu, 25 Jun 2009 16:37:45 +0000

[...] Writing My latest Bad Poem got published at Every Day Poets a couple weeks ago. It’s called Deja Vu, and while I liked it at the time, I’ve now recognized it as the piece of crap it is. [...]

By: Angel

Angel — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 16:07:27 +0000

Very dark piece. I felt hopelessness in it.

By: Sharon

Sharon — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 04:08:27 +0000

How depressing.

By: Roberta SchulbergGoro

Roberta SchulbergGoro — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 19:58:17 +0000

dj barber – It seems more like a protest against a department store than actual political anarchy. It might even be a personal grudge “writ large” against the owner. Terrible society where the people are willing to say or do anything dishonest or anything violent to another merely to injure or get attention.

Amy – WHY did you like it?

By: dj barber

dj barber — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 16:54:11 +0000

Is the point of anarchy to make the front page?

–dj

By: Roberta SchulbergGoro

Roberta SchulbergGoro — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 14:15:32 +0000

Moral – If your dress is in flames, rip it off or else you’ll be screaming-like. But the woman should have noticed in the first paragraph that there were hoses all over the street and she could have had taken her pick, running through the street over to any of them even though they are so BIG she might have toppled, sort of.

By: Amy Corbin

Amy Corbin — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 12:00:43 +0000

I read this a few times. I quite liked it, thanks.