ELEMENTAL RENTALS • by Steve Goble

You, me, ocean, tree …
elemental rentals,
vibrating notes
in a cosmic chord
the universe hums to itself.

Steve Goble writes fantasy, horror and science fiction, plus some poetry.

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ELEMENTAL RENTALS • by Steve Goble, 4.0 out of 5 based on 33 ratings
Posted on March 4, 2009 in Poems
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6 Responses to “ELEMENTAL RENTALS • by Steve Goble”


  1. sjhigbee Says:
    March 4th, 2009 at 12:48 pm

    What an absolutely fabulous way to describe the string theory! So neat and clever… You certainly get a 5 from me.

  2. Oonah V Joslin Says:
    March 4th, 2009 at 2:47 pm

    I loved it too. Thank you, Steve.

  3. Constance Says:
    March 4th, 2009 at 5:40 pm

    Make that 3 in love. :) Very nice, Steve.

  4. dj barber Says:
    March 5th, 2009 at 2:03 pm

    Ha! Very nice, Steve.

    –dj

  5. Juan Says:
    March 9th, 2009 at 12:48 pm

    The playful rhythm and sweet simplicity completely won me over.

  6. Steve Says:
    March 9th, 2009 at 10:57 pm

    Thank you all, very much.

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