Comments on: GRAVITY • by Kristy Stops

By: kristy stops

kristy stops — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 06:27:32 +0000

Thanks for your lovely comments, they are so encouraging! Sorry I didn’t reply before, but I was away and totally missed this! I just saw that it was posted today

By: Rumjhum

Rumjhum — Fri, 13 Mar 2009 03:27:55 +0000

From the first line right down to the very last, I was captured; captivated! Great poem!

By: sjhigbee

sjhigbee — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 22:21:41 +0000

Surprising and original – which is an achievement with a love poem. I very much enjoyed it.

By: dj barber

dj barber — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 15:51:10 +0000

Very well done.
–dj

By: Amy Corbin

Amy Corbin — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 14:59:01 +0000

I’m with Kathleen. I’d like to hear it read aloud also.

By: Kathleen Cassen Mickelson

Kathleen Cassen Mickelson — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 13:30:56 +0000

I love the structure of this piece! This really works on the page, but I would love to hear you read this aloud. Nice work.

By: Oonah V Joslin

Oonah V Joslin — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 13:10:48 +0000

I call you gravity,
But you make me drop metaphors like yesterday’s news.

I loved those two lines – that contreast between down to earth and raised awareness is just magical to me and I adored the ending, as you know.

By: Anne Brooke

Anne Brooke — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 09:32:09 +0000

Enjoyed this one – it brought me up short and made me think. Very arresting. And always good to see another Byron fan of course.

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Axxx