Comments on: ODE TO THE TILES OF MY BATHROOM FLOOR • by Doug Paul Case http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/ Fri, 12 Mar 2010 22:23:01 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Nancy Wilcox http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-4079 Nancy Wilcox Tue, 27 Oct 2009 16:18:28 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-4079 And how reassuring it is to know, they will never be soft. That's something you can count on. And how reassuring it is to know, they will never be soft. That’s something you can count on.

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-2360 dj barber Fri, 15 May 2009 19:44:57 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-2360 LOL! The day after the night before! Funny. --dj LOL! The day after the night before! Funny.

–dj

]]> By: Patricia J. Hale http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-2359 Patricia J. Hale Fri, 15 May 2009 19:13:04 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-2359 Delightful. Delightful.

]]> By: Amy Corbin http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-2358 Amy Corbin Fri, 15 May 2009 13:29:16 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-2358 Very clever. I don't think I've ever even thought of paying homage to the bathroom floors hardness. Very clever. I don’t think I’ve ever even thought of paying homage to the bathroom floors hardness.

]]> By: Kathleen Cassen Mickelson http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-2356 Kathleen Cassen Mickelson Fri, 15 May 2009 13:13:15 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-2356 I found this amusing, especially on a Friday (thinking of college kids and the weekend...). Sure, it could be expanded and other words considered, but this works! I found this amusing, especially on a Friday (thinking of college kids and the weekend…). Sure, it could be expanded and other words considered, but this works!

]]> By: Roberta SchulbergGoro http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-2355 Roberta SchulbergGoro Fri, 15 May 2009 12:49:56 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-2355 Is "stability" the right word or should it be "impermeability"? Should "soft" be "absorbent"? Is a line missing, such as "sending hosannas to your to your soft sponge submission as I stumble cleanly from the tub the next morning?" Is “stability” the right word or should it be “impermeability”? Should “soft” be “absorbent”?
Is a line missing, such as “sending hosannas to your to your soft sponge submission as I stumble cleanly from the tub the next morning?”

]]> By: Paul http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/comment-page-1/#comment-2354 Paul Fri, 15 May 2009 12:03:53 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/ode-to-the-tiles-of-my-bathroom-floor-by-doug-paul-case/#comment-2354 The theme to this poem could have been expanded. I wasn't too taken with the word 'soft' - 'gentle' would have better personified the tiled floor. The theme to this poem could have been expanded. I wasn’t too taken with the word ’soft’ – ‘gentle’ would have better personified the tiled floor.

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