Comments on: O’ER THE LONG HILLS • by dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/ Sat, 13 Mar 2010 13:09:23 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3465 dj barber Sun, 30 Aug 2009 21:39:53 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3465 Thank-you, Roberta. --dj Thank-you, Roberta.

–dj

]]> By: Roberta SchulbergGoro http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3463 Roberta SchulbergGoro Sun, 30 Aug 2009 14:17:53 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3463 Very evocative description - cool winking stars (stanza 2, line 6)( admittedly part of the "great vastness" (stanza 1, line 13) while roaming in the gloaming, away from sparkless shut-eyed unfettered, unwary dreamers(stanza 2, lines 11-16). Paints strong pictures. Very evocative description – cool winking stars (stanza 2, line 6)( admittedly part of the “great vastness” (stanza 1, line 13) while roaming in the gloaming, away from sparkless shut-eyed unfettered, unwary dreamers(stanza 2, lines 11-16). Paints strong pictures.

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3451 dj barber Fri, 28 Aug 2009 14:38:58 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3451 Thanks, QM. Hope to have another poem at EDP soon. --dj Thanks, QM. Hope to have another poem at EDP soon.

–dj

]]> By: QM http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3449 QM Fri, 28 Aug 2009 10:16:00 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3449 Always a fan of your work, well done, another stonker of a poem. I loved the light touches of rhyming here and there as well. Made me grin. Nicely done. Always a fan of your work, well done, another stonker of a poem.

I loved the light touches of rhyming here and there as well. Made me grin.

Nicely done.

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3448 dj barber Fri, 28 Aug 2009 04:50:38 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3448 Just wanted to thank everyone who read and commented. --dj Just wanted to thank everyone who read and commented.

–dj

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3447 dj barber Thu, 27 Aug 2009 23:30:05 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3447 Thanks so much, Oonah. --dj Thanks so much, Oonah.

–dj

]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3446 Oonah V Joslin Thu, 27 Aug 2009 21:51:49 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3446 In these summer months comments tendto be sparse but - be assured more people read than respond. Thank you for the poem, In these summer months comments tendto be sparse but – be assured more people read than respond. Thank you for the poem,

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3443 dj barber Thu, 27 Aug 2009 17:50:32 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3443 Thanks Paul, Elizabeth, Kathleen, and Amy. --dj Thanks Paul, Elizabeth, Kathleen, and Amy.

–dj

]]> By: Amy Corbin http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3442 Amy Corbin Thu, 27 Aug 2009 17:10:16 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3442 Very lovely, DJ. Very lovely, DJ.

]]> By: Kathleen Cassen Mickelson http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/comment-page-1/#comment-3441 Kathleen Cassen Mickelson Thu, 27 Aug 2009 16:12:54 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/oer-the-long-hills-by-dj-barber/#comment-3441 Lovely and elegant. Lovely and elegant.

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