it didn’t take long,
about six hundred days
give or take
a few, hard to say

exactly where our
fire died, our ice watered,
our limo ran out of gas
and picked up a couple of flats

it didn’t take long,
in geological time, logic’s
blind and what’s a soulmate anyway?

too much this or that fluid
in the brain

 

 

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John Ammirati 29, lives in Manchester, England.

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PINPOINT • by John Ammirati, 2.6 out of 5 based on 14 ratings

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2 Responses to “PINPOINT • by John Ammirati”

1. John Says:
   February 15th, 2012 at 9:18 pm

   Quaint and light, but absolutely accurate. Well done.

2. marion Says:
   February 22nd, 2012 at 1:11 pm

   Interesting…fluid on the brain, eh! :]

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