RUNNING WITH THE EAGLE • by Daniel Ausema

to G. M. Hopkins

Glimpses through the trees were all I caught,
the streak and gleam that hint at certain strength,
as its dodging through the trees escaped
my sight again. The teasing almost-seen
at every river bend and wrinkle pushed
me on. The river slipped by rocks and fallen
trees; the flood’s torrent rolled past
hidden animals,

                                until I turned
a sweeping bend without steep banks.
There it perched, aloof.

                                             I knew
that all my speed and swiftness, twists and turnings
brought me no great merit in its eyes.
Yet I will ever twist and spin for one
more glimpse.


Daniel Ausema has a background in experiential education and journalism and is now a stay-at-home dad. His fiction and poetry have appeared in dozens of publications, including EveryDay Fiction, Nemonymous, MindFlights and Raven Electrick. He lives in Colorado.

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RUNNING WITH THE EAGLE • by Daniel Ausema, 3.9 out of 5 based on 21 ratings
Posted on December 4, 2008 in Poems
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9 Responses to “RUNNING WITH THE EAGLE • by Daniel Ausema”


  1. dellfarmer Says:
    December 4th, 2008 at 1:27 am

    One Hopkins fan enjoyed this very much. Salute.

  2. Robin Herrnfeld Says:
    December 4th, 2008 at 5:44 am

    Simply beautiful, Daniel. A 5 from me for this one.

  3. Oonah V Joslin Says:
    December 4th, 2008 at 7:19 am

    Thank you for sending us this lovely poem.

  4. Celeste Says:
    December 4th, 2008 at 12:31 pm

    a BIG FIVE from me – subtle and revealing. Lyrical and beautiful. A gorgeous way to start the evening.

  5. R Jay Slais Says:
    December 4th, 2008 at 6:16 pm

    Great read Daniel, lovely ending!

  6. Sarah A. Says:
    December 5th, 2008 at 5:46 am

    I don’t know Hopkins, but this is a lovely poem. Great job, Daus!

  7. Daniel Ausema Says:
    December 5th, 2008 at 3:54 pm

    Thanks for all the kind comments!

  8. Interview with Daniel Ausema | Every Day Poets Says:
    March 18th, 2009 at 12:03 am

    [...] Ausema was our most-read poet in December 2008. His poem “Running with the Eagle” — its evocation of the natural strength and beauty of the raptor and the inspiration [...]

  9. Anuradha Vijayakrishnan Says:
    March 19th, 2009 at 4:34 am

    Beautiful. I remember chasing an eagle once…on water.

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