Comments on: SUPERCOLLIDER • by Michael H. Hanson

By: RHFay

RHFay — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 05:19:36 +0000

Definitely nice word usage. I would like to see more rich use of words in modern poetry. However, I will admit, Webster’s Dictionary happens to be one of my favourite books!

By: Michael

Michael — Tue, 11 Nov 2008 03:41:43 +0000

Thank you, everyone, for your excellent feedback and reviews.

I appreciate them very much.

With kind regards,

Michael

By: Constance

Constance — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 19:19:59 +0000

The geek in me really likes this poem and the parallels it draws.

By: Michael H. Hanson

Michael H. Hanson — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 23:59:47 +0000

Gee. I’m glad I decided to check on the publication status of my poem.
A wealth of feedback here. Seriously.

I really appreciate all the comments, good, as well as not so good.
This is how we learn to grow as poets.

Thank you all for sharing your thoughts on my poem.

Michael

By: R Jay Slais

R Jay Slais — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 00:41:58 +0000

Superb language here, awesome read Michael. Congrats on this publication.!

Smiles!
R Jay

By: Erin

Erin — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 15:27:21 +0000

Liked this poem a lot. Good imagery, and good parallels.

By: Oonah V Joslin

Oonah V Joslin — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 14:53:52 +0000

I particularly liked the first two lnes of the second stanza – almost like I felt it…
Thank you for sending this to us.
Oonah

By: rumjhum

rumjhum — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 12:39:30 +0000

I liked the use of scientific terms and words in this emotional poem – that was an unusual touch. I liked the way it all culminated in the ending.

By: Celeste

Celeste — Wed, 05 Nov 2008 20:47:35 +0000

I thought that was beautiful.

By: mark dalligan

mark dalligan — Wed, 05 Nov 2008 20:33:44 +0000

Hi Michael,

liked this clever and topical way to describe our self created doubts and tensions that yield to the beneficial gravity of love.

Cheers

Mark