Comments on: THE WHISPER OF FINGERTIP • by L R Humphries http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/ Thu, 09 Sep 2010 14:16:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Lewis Humphries http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-613 Lewis Humphries Sat, 20 Dec 2008 20:31:26 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-613 Thanks Erin - the format is hit and miss with some people but am glad that you enjoyed it. I think it aides the rhythm enormously. Thanks Erin – the format is hit and miss with some people but am glad that you enjoyed it. I think it aides the rhythm enormously.

]]> By: Erin http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-584 Erin Wed, 17 Dec 2008 16:43:50 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-584 I loved the format and the rhythm of this poem. I loved the format and the rhythm of this poem.

]]> By: Lewis Humphries http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-582 Lewis Humphries Wed, 17 Dec 2008 15:22:41 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-582 Folks Many thanks for ytour comments, and thanks for Oonah who ensured that the piece was centred, I think it works well visually. Once agai, am glad that you enjoyed the piece.... Folks

Many thanks for ytour comments, and thanks for Oonah who ensured that the piece was centred, I think it works well visually.

Once agai, am glad that you enjoyed the piece….

]]> By: rumjhum http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-578 rumjhum Wed, 17 Dec 2008 07:55:19 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-578 This is superb! Thanks. This is superb! Thanks.

]]> By: Barbara McGinley http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-575 Barbara McGinley Tue, 16 Dec 2008 21:30:46 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-575 First half, if not three-quarters really flows. "as slithered, silver seepings illume the twilight’s mould; and hue the pale of winter’s drift, a deeper shade of old." Wonderful sounds and rhythm! Barbara First half, if not three-quarters really flows. “as slithered, silver seepings
illume the twilight’s mould;
and hue the pale
of winter’s drift,
a deeper
shade of
old.”
Wonderful sounds and rhythm!
Barbara

]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-572 Oonah V Joslin Tue, 16 Dec 2008 20:01:53 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-572 a deeper shade of old. Mmmm, Lovely :)! a deeper
shade of
old.

Mmmm, Lovely :) !

]]> By: Robin Herrnfeld http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/comment-page-1/#comment-570 Robin Herrnfeld Tue, 16 Dec 2008 11:46:49 +0000 http://www.everydaypoets.com/the-whisper-of-fingertip-by-l-r-humphries/#comment-570 Oh, beautiful! Love it. Especially the first "verse" sounds delicious. Well done. Oh, beautiful! Love it. Especially the first “verse” sounds delicious. Well done.

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